Basic comic story layout

Act I

-       See Blake Thompson looking through the help wanted ads from a futuristic paper

-       Daughter comes in and tells Blake a help wanted ad at the store and Blake bonds with daughter

-       Mother is working to keep the house and food but struggling

-       Blake goes into store his daughter told him to go

-       Told “no” from store owner saying Blake is overqualified and other companies will go after him for hiring him and his super hero abilities. Shopkeeper says “thank you for taking out all of the crime in the country but I can’t help you. “

-       Blake comes out of the store and is stopped by a man named Clarence McShane.

Act II

-       Blake rejects Clarence and goes home to realize the family has been evicted

-       Family finds a spot on the street to sleep

-       As the family sleeps Blake leaves to find Clarence

-       Blake becomes the bodyguard the head underground boss, Clarence

-       First job Blake does not know what is happening except for protecting Clarence as he is transporting money to an airplane.

-       Police comes and Blake protects Clarence with his super power accuracy with the side effect of becoming temporarily blind from the police

-       Blake puts the money on the plane and realizes it is going to a different countries health resource center.

-       Blake corners Clarence and asks where and what he is doing with the money

-       Clarence says he is cheating the government and stealing money and giving it to people in need like his family in a different country

-       Clarence tells Blake his back story of his family got deported when the new government came into power

-       Blake stays up all night and goes to his families new apartment and sees his family sleeping

-       Blake decides to fully support the underground mob and secretly take down the government

Act III

Years Later

-       Police figure out who Blake is and his super power weakness. They exploit it and sets up Clarence and Blake into a sting operation

-       Blake and Clarence are tricked and while Blake is blind Clarence dies

-       Blake and the mob are completely devastated and unorganized

-       Nobody know what to do when police are capturing individuals

-       Police captures Blake’s daughter

-       Blake decides to take over Clarence’s role and become the new boss

-       Contemplates by himself that the superhero of no crime methodology does not work because there is no balance to the world. Because he destroyed the old balance he will create a new one

-       The end to a new beginning

-       THE END

• Still need to figure out names for Blake's daughter and wife
• Still need to figure out Clarence's other subordinate names and if there is any interaction with them
• Still need to figure out if there will be any interaction with this countries president or FBI or if it's only going to be the cops after Blake and Clarence